Wednesday, December 12, 2012

IA Review II

Hey young readers, here's a couple of questions for ya. Are the characters and the dialogue believable?  Do you care about these characters?  Are you rooting for them to succeed or fail?

18 comments:

  1. chapter 2 was the best
    i can say the interduction was great
    camille dr.coreneeluis are great charaters

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  2. yea they are believable to me very believable.
    i do care about these characters very much i think there dreams are very believable to.
    i rooting for them to succeed thier dreams.
    i just think they need a little more action but oyher wise i think this chapter was good.

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  3. it is very believable .
    I do care about the characters because how real they are.
    I'm always going to succeed.

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  4. i love the characters and how the setting is. im loving the thought put into the conflicts of the story.

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  5. Railsplitters is very addicting i couldnt stop reading it i substituted the tv whith this book i read it so much i got a head ace but i couldnt put the book down cant wait for his next adventure

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  6. I can't wait to read it either!!!!!!!

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  7. I heard a lot about this book. It must be good. I'm gonna read some this weekend.

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    1. JOSH YOU HAVE TO READ IT THATS HOW GOOD IT IS YOU KEEP COMING BACK FOR MORE

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  8. I guess ima read it today and for the rest of the weekend

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  9. Just finished Ch.3 I really hope Ham's ok!

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  10. ch3: i was really hooked in when ham pulled out the black item" and hid it behind his back. i really wanted to kno what it was.once ham was stabbed i was really shocked. i really hope hes ok

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  11. im about to read ch.4. does anyone hav any ideas of what happens to hector......

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  12. This story is craftily written with unexpected twists and realistic characters. An absolutely tremendous accomplishment, for a first time author to produce something so solid and engaging while jumping hurdles and juggling life all at the same time. I'm thrilled that so many also believe this is a great story and are anxious to tell friends about it. So proud of you John, and excited to ride the waves with you!

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  13. I just finished reading chapter four. I can't wait to find out what happens with Hector. I'm pulling for you bro!

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  14. just finnished chapter one and i cant stop reading

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